You're the basis of their meaning.
Songs were still about you,
Facing stasis at your being.
Artsy magnum opus
Could not share time with your presence,
Temple car--my focus--
Treated art like Puri peasants.
Crooked teeth were fine, there
Was no structure metal straightened
That could best your set (where
Every day the charm got greatened).
Offset tiles planted
By the slanted hand of healing,
Health and joy both granted
By your gentle dental beaming.
Facing stasis at your being.
Artsy magnum opus
Could not share time with your presence,
Temple car--my focus--
Treated art like Puri peasants.
Crooked teeth were fine, there
Was no structure metal straightened
That could best your set (where
Every day the charm got greatened).
Offset tiles planted
By the slanted hand of healing,
Health and joy both granted
By your gentle dental beaming.
oo I like the phrase dental beaming. Does that mean smile? It's what I got from it :-P
ReplyDelete"Gentle dental beaming" is so sweet, really.
ReplyDeleteI love the opening lines...there is such an urgency there.