Can you guess what I'd like?
I'd like a break
From simpering, simple expression you fake.
Do you know what I'd strike?
Your stupid face.
Exposing a malar bone, raking apace.
All the liars insist
On stomping hope,
Then kicking it upward on razor aslope.
There will never exist
A respite from
Mock humbleness mocking to get me so glum.
But my frown is a bridge
Between two sides,
Connecting this gloom to where choler resides.
When my hate sends a ridge
With phantom hand
The aeriform blow will affect breath you planned.
A musical swing like an executioner's stroke. Nice use of "affect" as a verb.
ReplyDeleteHow did you acquire this incredible vocab? You're like V from V for Vendetta ;)
DeleteOh, Crap didn't mean that as a reply.
ReplyDeletebold, smart and right on the money!
ReplyDeleteThe message sings through your words' bling! :P
ReplyDeleteThese could have been the lyrics to a Beastie Boys song!
ReplyDeleteHa! Both funny and furious. The first two lines establish a great, familiar tone.
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant! And is a good example of why I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award... see here: http://itsanorganizedmess.blogspot.com/2012/07/liebster-blog-award.html
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