20120503

Same Thing

Can you guess what I'd like?
I'd like a break
From simpering, simple expression you fake.

Do you know what I'd strike?
Your stupid face.
Exposing a malar bone, raking apace.

All the liars insist
On stomping hope,
Then kicking it upward on razor aslope.

There will never exist
A respite from
Mock humbleness mocking to get me so glum.

But my frown is a bridge
Between two sides,
Connecting this gloom to where choler resides.

When my hate sends a ridge
With phantom hand
The aeriform blow will affect breath you planned.



8 comments:

  1. A musical swing like an executioner's stroke. Nice use of "affect" as a verb.

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    1. How did you acquire this incredible vocab? You're like V from V for Vendetta ;)

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  2. Oh, Crap didn't mean that as a reply.

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  3. bold, smart and right on the money!

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  4. The message sings through your words' bling! :P

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  5. These could have been the lyrics to a Beastie Boys song!

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  6. Ha! Both funny and furious. The first two lines establish a great, familiar tone.

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  7. This is brilliant! And is a good example of why I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award... see here: http://itsanorganizedmess.blogspot.com/2012/07/liebster-blog-award.html

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